Solid. My only bit of advice would be in the future make the monster come from the other side to avoid confusion as to the two character's location in the world. look up the "180 degree rule" on wikepedia.
I'm not a fan of the show by any means, but the animation lacks dynamic movement in places like the tail. The animation kinda dies from the neck down.
Interesting film. One thing I think you should really do a bit of research on is sound mixing. My sound teacher at university says that if you can turn off the picture and the sound works well on its own, you have yourself a good mix.
Moreover, some of your sounds were too loud and when you wan a sound effect to loop or pause between shots, you're gonna wanna crossfade them.
Nevertheless, good work! I look forward to seeing more.
Really nice piece! The intro does prepare you for the awesomeness that comes later.
thx alot. ^_^
I tried hard.
Brilliant! I love it.
Wow! Thanks a lot :)
Really amazing brushwork!
Thank you =]
Cool work. The eyes possibly float a bit too far above the cheekbones and nose area.
Great line art! I like the dynamic pose and the strong character design. Sweet work!
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